Saturday, 28 April 2012

Chapter 3

Hi Thatters!!! This chapter is again longer, hope you like it. Like I always say, please tell me how I can improve.

As Gary and Mark entered, they both were suprised, confused and amazed at what was happening.
'Happy Birthday Mark And Gary!' Everyone shouted. A range of old and new friends filled the room. Including Howard, Chandra, Jason, Susie and Sofie.
'Eh? How did this happen?' Gary laughed in suprise.
Chandra ran up to both of them and gave them a hug and Gary a kiss.
'As soon as you left to see Mark, I called Howard to help me set it up, we've been working all day.' Chandra said smiling.
'How many of you were orginising this?'
'Just me and Howard, for about 5 days now and it's perfect, just between both of your birthdays.'
Gary gave Chandra another kiss and Mark gave Howard a brotherly hug.
***
Robbie and Ciara were sitting at Robbie's house, thinking over the events in that day.
'I can't believe you did that.'  Ciara said fairly shook up.
'I told you how sorry I am, it was just the guilt, all the guilt with Mark but, when I saw you, it all went away.' Robbie said, worried what Ciara might do.
'If you loved me, you wouldn't have done it, despite Mark,'
'Me and Mark have a massive 'brotherhood', you don't know how hard it was to confess this to him.'
Ciara left the room, not in tears as it wasn't so much a fight/argument. From what Robbie could hear it sounded like packing. He couldn't really blame her.
She came downstairs with her suitcase and kissed him.
'As much as I love you and you love me, Mark and your 'brotherhood' is too much to lose.' She whispered in his ear, almost in tears.
'Don't, please, the situation will resolve it's self.'
'Not quick enough, also, think about Sofie.'
With that she left, in a black taxi and her hair in a ponytail.
Robbie sat for a minute, then grabbed his car keys and headed for the door.
***
A hour into the party, everyone was having a good time, laughing and chatting. The 4 boys met an old school friend, Chloe, she had lost weight and her dark brown hair was now blonde. Howard talked to her the most, while Mark talked to Sofie and discussed what had happened.
'So, know doubt it'll be in tomorrows papers then?' Mark said partly in disgrace.
'I just got so angry at him, so I slapped him.'
'Better you than me, he deserved it.' Mark said laughing, even though he was more hurt that Robbie did that to Sofie.

Howard sat talking to Chloe, they seemed to have quite alot in common music taste and outdoor hobbies. They both fancied each other this night, but knowing Howard he would be to shy to arrange a date, not even that, even a small day out as friends. He relays on Jason to help him.
'I never spoke to you that much, even though I met you through Gary, but, just the fact we have so much in common. I thought we would already know that by now.' Chloe said quite calmly for what Howard was feeling.
'Yeah, I know.' He said 'You can come to one of my DJing shows, sometime, maybe?'
For Howard, he was feeling really happy with himself, this is the first time he's asked a girl to go anywhere with him, for a long time.
Chloe reached over and gave him a kiss. Fairly short, but sweet.
'Oh my word!' Chloe said in shock.
'What?' Howard said worrying 'Was it crap?'
'No, you're great, that was great but look!'
Behind Howard, Sofie and Mark were doing the exact same thing, but longer and more caring for each other.

Jason looked out the window. It turned out Howard and Chloe weren't the only ones that noticed Mark and Sofie. What Jason saw, was Robbie, Robbie looking horrified at the sight he saw before him. Everyone seemed to be minding their own businness and Jason's girlfriend, Susie, was talking to Chandra and Gary. Jason still wasn't keen on Robbie still, even since the 90s, he just acted like he did.
He stepped outside to talk to him.
'Why the hell did you do that!?' Jason shouted knowing only Robbie could hear him.
'You don't know the whole story!' Robbie was a cross between upset and anger, not at Jay, but at himself mostly.
'Sofie told us everything.'
'She seems to be telling Mark the whole story, that tw...'
Jason quickly butted in before he had time to call Mark
'Don't you dare!'
'I was going to apoligise, but why the hell should I?'
'You're the one to blame, for all of this, you left them with no choice!'
Robbie knew that was the truth, but hated hearing it from someone else, because he knew, it was now obvious.
Almost straight away he punched Jason straight in the face, hard enough for him to be lying there unconsious. Robbie didn't see the full damage he did to Jason as he ran around the corner and drove away. He realised he would have hurt Jay, but not that much, he didn't want to think. No one knew Robbie was there, that Jason went out the house, thhat Jason was outside lying on the floor with a bust lip and nose.

Wednesday, 25 April 2012

Chapter 2

This chapter is abit longer. Have quite alot of homework this week :/. Sorry Jason isn't in this one, he gets a bigger part next time :). Feel free to tell me how I can improve

Mark opened the door to Gary's knock, they both stood and looked at one another for a while until Gary grabbed and hugged Mark as he started to tear up.
'I can't believe she would do that!' Gary said in surprise as they sat on the sofa's in the main living room.
'Neither could I, it was quite a shock and thats not the worse thing' Mark said in a sturn voice
'How you where going to propose or, who she left you for?'
'Who she left for, I can't believe both of them!' Mark started to tear up again.
'I can't believe Robbie did that either.'
***
Chandra was cleaning the house while Gary was away. The nicest the house looked and smelled in a while. She then put on some of her nicest clothing to make her look the part. She heard the doorbell and jumped. She started debating with herself if this was worth it.
'Hey Chan! Nice to see you again in so long' Howard said with a big smile across his face.
'Nice to see you too' Chandra said giving him a massive hug.
'How great is this going to be?'
'I know, I know but, I've been thinking is this going to work? I'm worried.' Chandra started to look nervous.
Howard looked at her, no expression and started to breathe a sigh.
'Just look at how good you'll feel, nothing bad can come out of this.'
'I suppose.'
They both smiled at each other and Howard shut the door behind him.
***
Sofie woke up the next morning, what seemed to be Robbie's house. She couldn't stop smiling for a few minutes, she turned around and Robbie wasn't there, she looked at the small clock on the wall, 10:45, it read.
'Where would he be?' she wondereed to herself. A note on the next pillow read:
Off to the studio,
Emergancy band meeting
might be awhile
Love Rob xx
Robbie was infact sitting 20 minutes away in a cafe. He was sitting nervously, waiting.
'What did I do last night?' he thought to himself 'I'll be hurting her feelings, also Mark's. What if everyone hates me?'
Just the Ciara entered. Her curly brown hair matches her deep dark eyes with her pinkish face. All of Robbie's feelings just vanished as he kissed her, a long sweet kiss.
'Lovely to see you again.' Ciara said with a smile to show her perfect white teeth.
'You too, it feels like ages ago.'
'I know, I've missed you so much' Robbie said playing with her hair while looking into her eyes.
They sat and talked about little things for hours. Robbie was about to leave for now
'I love...'
Before he had time to finish, the cafe door slammed open and Sofie came storming in. She reached their table and slapped Robbie hard on the cheek. Her face was as almost as bright as her ginger hair
'OW!' Robbie shouted
'You desirved it!' Sofie shouted in fury.
"Erm, have you got a problem?' Ciara stood up to reach Sofie's level. Robbie butted in before it coould get any worse, his cheek bright red from the slap.
'I did something I shouldn't have done last night.' he started to explain, 'I felt so bad for Mark I didn't want to love Ciara anymore and I tried to ressolve that through Sofie, I am so, so sorry.'
The whole cafe just stared in silence, all like 'Robbie Williams having an affair?'. The girls where both silent with shcok and two news vans arrived.
'Shit!' Robbie shouted
***
Gary took Mark out to a Liverpool match to try and clear his head for abit and just relax, they won 2-1 against Bolton.
'Great game tonight' Mark said
'Yeah, especially with 5 minutes extra time and Gerrard getting injured!'
'Can I come back to your place for abit before I go to Jason's?'
'Yes, of coarse.'
When they got to Gary's and turned the light onin the main room. They both got a massive shock.

Sunday, 22 April 2012

Chapter 1

Hey! This if my first Fanfic, Hope you like it, if not please tell me how I can improve

Mark was sitting at his kitchen table, twirling his spoon in his coffee. It was only 8:00, not the time he is ormally up, everyone knows Mark can sleep into the afternoon if he wants too. This perticular day he was up early, he could hardly sleep since his girlfriend broke up with him the night before
'What am I suppossed to do?' He whispered to himself.
Just then there was a knock at the door, the figure that stood there was tall, slim and dark haired. It was of coarse Jason. Mark let Jason come through and they discussed last nights events.
'So, she loves someone else?' Jason asked
'Thats what my text said', Mark wasn't in the best of moods, especially as it was fairly early for him.
'Who, I mean, wold leave a massive pop star like you?' Jason laughed. Mark knew fine well for, but felt the need to tell Gary first, even though his text was sent to more than enough people.
'I don't know, she just left a note, I found it after returning from the studio'
Jason knew Mark was trying to hold back the tears, Jason can sense emotion in his band mates better than the others.
'Here, stay at mine tonight, it's best for you to have some company'
'Will Susie mind?'
'Not at all, she loves company'
Jason had been with Susie for 6 months now, they've lived together for 2 of them months.
'Ok, thanks alot Jay!'
***
Gary woke up, his arm wrapped around Chandra, his girlfriend, his girlfriend that just moved in with him.
'Morning sweetie' Gary whispered
'Good morning' she yawned
Gary rolled over and reached for his phone, he jumped out of bed as soon as he read the message from Mark.
'What's up Gaz?' Chandra knew something wasn't right, she was partly worried.
'Ciara finished Mark!'
'After 3 years! He was planning on proposing, wasn't he?'
'Yes, he must be really upset, bless him, I'll be back soon'.
As soon as the frount door slammed, Chandra started to text Howard
Did you hear about Mark?
Gary is very worried
Chan x
About 10 minutes later she got a reply
Yes, I talked to him on the phone,
he's staying with Jay
I'm still coming over later?
Howard x
Howard's text put a smile on Chandra's face
***
Robbie had just arrived back into England. Sofie was there to great him, she give him a massive hug.
'Welcome back Rob' Ssaid while hugging him
'I'm happy to be back too!' He said smiling
'Did you hear about Mark?'
'Oh, erm, yeah, I talked to him before. Not the best of times, I mean it's his birthday in 4 days!'
Robbie didn't talk to Mark, but he talked to Ciara. He wasn't going to tell Sofie that.
On the way home Sofie was debating with her self weather to tell Robbie how she felt, or not.
Robbie let Sofie unpack, while she was unpacking Robbie brought up 2 cups of coffee and they relaxed on his bed.
'You know' Robbie said 'I think I prefer this house here then the one in L.A'
Sofie laughed 'Apart from the weather'.
'Obviously'.
Robbie rolled over and kissed her. Sofie couldn't believe it.. Did he love her? Or just felt lonely?